Progress + Feedback

Firstly, I decided to analyse at the feedback I received from both of my mentors for my proposal and apply it to my Final Major project considering the comments to ensure I do not make the same mistake twice.

Grade B2 :

    - Excellent introduction - the research you include endorses the relevance of your idea and puts it into context. Your project outcome is clear and supported by primary interview research from the designer.

-Good considerations for both outcomes - your second outcome focuses on showcasing your own skill which is a great idea with regards to self promotion. Your USP is well considered as well as your target market. 

To consider:

- Think carefully about your competitors
- Delve deeper into the world of fashion film and look at other key inspirations
- Create visual examples of your ideas e.g. Storyboards
- Clear face charts and how the make up relates to the designs
- How will you show your collaboration with the designer? Through film or recording the interview?
- Consider more about the website e.g. how to get traffic on the site?
- What cameras and equipment will you need?
- How will you be shooting each scene, go in depth and explain
- Will there be any use of props or lighting?

From the comments that I received I realised that I need to carry out test shoots as well as making my plan VISUAL considering every step for the film.